来来,学院派的兄弟们,帮忙翻译一下....

神经软软

At the huge city, I have already made it a rule a kind of solitude, but again go round and begin again of life ……

accidently  blows into the sky, but discovers the world is more open and spacious ……

Perhaps, the person should look for a different life

Night, lights, originally the world is also very lonesome

Perhaps, a kind of each life, all have rainbow after rain and the similar clouds……

[ 本帖最后由 神经软软 于 2007-5-23 02:00 PM 编辑 ]

baijin7717

原帖由 ANATA 于 2007-5-23 01:54 PM 发表
.....我已经快无语了..

我的如何。。。。

ANATA

在巨大的城市
in this huge city,
我已经习惯一种孤独，而又周而复始的生活……
I ‘ve already conditioned to the lonliness and the cycle of life.
意外吹进天空
suddenness was blowed in to the sky.

却发现世界更加空阔……
and i found the world is larger than i thought.
也许，人应该寻找不同的生活
maybe everyone should look for a different kind of life.

夜晚、灯火
the lamplights of this night make me think
原来世界也很寂寞
the world also feels longly.

也许，每一种生活都有雨后的彩虹

maybe, every kinda life has the rainbow after rain.


和相似的云朵……
and the similar clouds...

bbsmaster

原帖由 ANATA 于 2007-5-23 01:56 PM 发表
在巨大的城市
in this huge city,
我已经习惯一种孤独，而又周而复始的生活……
I ‘ve already conditioned to the lonliness and the cycle of life.
意外吹进天空
suddenness was blowed in to the sky.

却发现世界更加空阔……
and i found the world is larger than i thought.
也许，人应该寻找不同的生活
maybe everyone should look for a different kind of life.

夜晚、灯火
the lamplights of this night make me think
原来世界也很寂寞
the world also feels longly.

也许，每一种生活都有雨后的彩虹

maybe, every kinda life has the rainbow after rain.


和相似的云朵……
and the similar clouds...

惊现眉笔.

mywould

在还没变YD前给舌头顶一下

特立獨行的豬

原帖由 ANATA 于 2007-5-23 01:56 PM 发表
在巨大的城市
in this huge city,
我已经习惯一种孤独，而又周而复始的生活……
I ‘ve already conditioned to the lonliness and the cycle of life.
意外吹进天空
suddenness was blowed in to the sky ...

缺少意境。。不押韵。。驳回重做。。。

baijin7717

各字有各自的所长啊

batigoalzyh

唉
须根的翻译
实在.......

baijin7717

原帖由 须根洛夫 于 2007-5-23 01:48 PM 发表
在巨大的城市
我已经
习惯一种孤独，而又周而复始的生活……

意外吹进天空
却发现世界更加空阔……

也许，人应该寻找不同的生活

夜晚、灯火
原来世界也很寂寞

也许，每一种生活
都有雨后的彩虹 ...

须根斑竹你无敌了

神经软软

原帖由 须根洛夫 于 2007-5-23 01:48 PM 发表
In the big city
i loney again and again(过去式不懂)

i can't think the wing(风好象是这样的) in to the sky
but i see the world bigger and bigger

眉笔~man must find diff*** life

night~light
just the world si loney too

眉笔 ~~every life
also have colour behind(在什么之后也好象是这样的)the rain
and like the could(云是这样写吗?)

红色部分给我印象灰常灰常深刻,这风的英文还长得跟鸡翅膀差不多,哈哈哈哈